Rewrites

We have lots of books to read. Some are better than others.

I have some Golden Books, just like the ones mum and dad had when they were little. But mine are in pristine condition, no tattered corners yet...We were reading one the other day when dad announced 'these are written really badly'.

Today we were reading a different story and dad announced 'this is written really badly'. So he made up his own story using the pictures.

Instead of the playful dog getting bored with the red ball (yes, they actually used the word 'bored'), the playful dog practiced bowling like Warney! We also thought we could do a better job than rhyming 'inside' with 'night'!

Dad enjoyed the new-improved story a lot more. He says we're actually going to rewrite it properly, print out the new words, and stick them in the book.

Next, we're going to rewrite Scuffy the Tugboat...